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Remember this day -
never before and never again,
will my heart be as full as now.
You are exalted and timely,
having touched something that will grow
blooming in my spirit.

Remember this day -
when June had begun,
rushing to become part of a
miraculous rebirth.
(I’d forgotten how to feel
special to someone.)

Remember this day -
when I was filled with laughter,
until I thought I might crack.
Read my words and know
they are my only way to reach you.

I hope it is enough.

Author notes

This is one of the first poems I wrote for a man I met on this website. Before we'd met face to face for the first time, we were both fairly sure we were in love. We started talking through our poetry on June 7th and this poem was written June 10th.

At the first of October, he moved, lock, stock & barrel nearly 1000 miles to move in with me.

So, I would say that this poem fits both option 4 initially and option 3 now!
:-)

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  • fake-or-real-smile
    November 2, 2008

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    Aww this is sooo sweet *is completely jealous* haha

    I love the lines:
    "when I was filled with laughter,
    until I thought I might crack."

    If your words are written through poetry, then it should be enough as the majority of poets write from their hearts

    well done, good luck and thanks for entering.

    Rebecca

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  • Nothing But No
    June 10, 2008
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    -Pukes-

    You, make me love sick. This was fabulous and so damn cute I could die.


    • Bean Sidhe silver member
      June 10, 2008

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      *pukes back* Yea, I know, huh? But I'm trying to write less gloom & doom...just to see if I could, were I properly inspired.


      • Nothing But No
        June 10, 2008
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        Of course you can write non doom and gloom, you aren't me you actually have a heart. LOL


  • faerie
    June 10, 2008
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    Sappy? I think it's beautiful and defantly true!!
    I can really relate to this!
    luv ya!


    • Bean Sidhe silver member
      June 10, 2008
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      Aww, thanks girlie! I just wanted to see if I could still write something that wasn't gloomy! I'm glad you relate & hope all is well with you!

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