Vampires! Holy smoke, there is a blow out,
Am I the forsaken, O noble one?
For I feel him raging deep within:
Burning in desire, wailing for his love.
Hold on, did I ever see him before?
Never with those fangs, long nails.
How could I, for he was fascinating;
Seeping in passion, love, and desire.
But then, a vampire woman fired my desire;
Throwing a pleasant sensation down my spine.
In fear and fascination my loins had quivered,
Legs trembled forcing me back to my seat.
I can see her longing, grasping me to her;
As her deep drawn fangs, go down within me.
I shudder and cry as she draws my strength,
Sipping, blending her blood with mine.
There, I feel my self growing within her,
Mounting, floating, to her sweet wishes call.
Quench my thirst, I suckle at her boobs.
Her juices, supplanting mine with her's.
But I struggle to loosen her steady grip,
Unfazed she sucks from me, deep in wild passion;
Replacing my fear with her vampire blood
In ecstasy, calling me, her 'vampire man'.
In delight I sink my growing fangs deep into her
Clawing her closer to me in vampire worship.
I too must know, vampires replace my blood,
Soul-mates we become in this charming world.
Let her lift me through the purification route,
Into vampire country with her magical charm;
I know, I am her unique love growing within her
Can she really feel me struggle in vampire form?
Vampire’s care not for human dreams,
Can I ever become a vampire; I ask myself?
Or expose the horrific tales of their death,
For me, I know vampires can never exist.
Author notes
Picture Unknown Source.
Placement credit FD
A contest entry
- Just A Dreamer ~ Winklings and Friends: #88. by Lyndon.
6000 points, ended June 20, 2008, 37 entries
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Do vampires exist can any one tell??
Comments
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Nice job. I liked it. Good luck and thanks for entering!
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An unusual mix
...vampires in love. The idea is fascinating and it would save a lot of people if it were true. Ha! I like your poem with its passion and cruelty blended with the tenderness.
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tinge of sadness
The person sounds like He would want to be a vampire but cant take the killing.. Very apt, since this is what most people question.. Loved the mix of beauty and death, of struggle and acceptance. Good luck in the contest, and thankyou for a great read.
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Wow, such beautiful words. I enjoyed reading this. I could imagine the story the whole way through. I asked for no erotica, but I will let this slide since there wasn't but a line to two of it. Thank you for entering, and good luck!
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Love your work!
Even though this is a Dragon contest I will allow the entry. I also do Dark and Erotic. This is good Gothic that will put me in a difficult position when I judge. But, because I value the skill of the write, it stays. Good risk taking in the voice that you used. A vampire write that left me thinking.
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sorry
I did not realize this was for dragons only.
It would be my pleasure if the poem becomes the bottom line in a dragon contest, as I am really a lycan dragon.
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very interesting, what a take on this.
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Brilliant entry. Hope you do well.
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If they did exist
they would spread HIV AIDS! Terrible.
Light-hearted but exciting if one willingly suspends disbelief.
This is a slightly irregular type of blank verse in quatrains. Fascinating. 7 to 8 words per line. Many decasyllabics.
A really enjoyable dream.
Thank you for gracing this anthology that is this contest with your poem.
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I must thank you for the honour.
If I were the judge, I would have thrown out the poem, just looking at the title.
I think, Discovery the TV channel, showed how vampire clubs and believers act as pictures.
Then someone I chat with on the net, puts more ideas into my mind and I react. Knowing this is useless talk. I am glad others here think like me. Thank you for the comments.
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