Shattering handcuffs
of society,
embossed in metals
of free spirit,
light emerald eyes
highlighted in gold,
stare into a future
with opportunity emerging
with beat of wings of moth.
Free
or barred in
certain uncertainty
staring
from clear cracked mirror.
Author notes
photographer: Ben Duggan
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Fantastic use of imagery to convey the emotional message....I quite liked the paradox of 'certain uncertainty' Great poem....
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Thank you!
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OH I do like this very much! a very different take! well done! i LOVE the second stanza!! and "certain uncertainty".....leaves much to dwell on!
you've done wonderfully!
thank you for entering!
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"Opportunity emerging with beat of wings of moth" holds such great depth!!
Great write hun
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Thanks dear!
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This is dilemma as natural as breathing. we have to accept, just like we accept natural laws. Some times stepping in and at times out. Well done 'dear sister'
Venu bhaya
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Thank you for your review Bhaya
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salam,
well excellent analysis. May Allah bless u with much more talent.
i do not think anything better can be told about this pic.
All the best.
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Wa-alaikum-assalam.....So glad you dropped by your lovely comment and wishes...such pictures are usually not what I write for,since such high fashion goes beyond me... I challenged myself! Had hubby wondering where my mind was when he returned from office
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Oppps... almost forgot
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You have peeled the emotions from this and mixed them with beautiful words to caputure a vision... Wonderfully done... Best of luck...
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment and applause!
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awwww wow, this is great. lovely take on the prompt and good luck
take care
stephanie
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Thank you so much dear!
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this verse is quite good. but I could not have understood the depth without the image.. nice take on the picture contest. they relate in a superb manner.
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Thank you , this piece is specifically for the picture...glad you see the co-relation!
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i found this simply intense and i cant explain it
enjoyed no doubt
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glad you enjoyed it so much!
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