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Yearning for You

Skin touching skin
Burning, aching, yearning
Wanting lustful releases.
I touch your chest as
As you trail kisses down mine
Leave me breathless,
Heaving and panting.
I’ll take you naked
Not having, but wanting
Smooth skin, taut
Over rippling muscles
Cherishing every second,
A whirl of instinct
Flutters about our minds
As we climb together until
We fall as one beneath
Moist sheets


Author notes

i used alot of the same words and phrases in this one as Just....but i like them both, so i posted them both

i do need a good title for this one, can anyone help?!?!

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Comments

  • Cottoncandyrose
    July 7

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    OMG that is amazing I absolutely love it. I once wrote a poem like this before.. Good job I like Over rippling muscle thats ho
  • diabeticboy
    June 10
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    very great imagry i could almost see you in your breathlessness quite motivating actually

  • Justin
    June 10

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    This was very vivid and beautiful. Your word choices painted a perfect picture. Hmm... as for a title... I dunno... something with "caress?"

    • Dancing Alone
      June 10
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      why thank you,
      i am honestly lost about a title....i was actually thinking abuot something with caress in it, but i wans't sure....caress is too pretty of a word to be matched with this though....
      arrrgh