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Profound

Her beauty is
Profound
Endless in its drapes
Eclipsing your eyes
So you see no mistake
The flaws you
Once saw
In her are erased
And filled with voluptuous
Poise and grace
The time it took
Seems like seconds
You are sure
But she falls back on the tide
Drifting
Floating
Forevermore.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    Ah..what a take you brought in response to the prompt..just wonderful take..well done...thank you so much for entering my contest.....