what is love a beauty that comes from above
a swan descending or the flight of a dove
unconditionally to give what is inside of me
to bloom unfold to reveal what is given free
no stings or binds conditions or boundaries
love is larger than my mind could ever be
i just gotta get out of me too see
i open my heart to receive what thinking
couldn't conceive
A contest entry
- Contest Dalaney's Rhyme part 3 "New" by Sue Cardwell.
650 points, ended June 21, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Celebration- 100 Word/Title Prompts! by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended September 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I agree with your idea of love. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for this entry in our contest, it is very interesting. This poem would be improved by some capitalization, especially 'I' and also punctuation.
Please join us in future contests...Sue and Jeff
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out there in space
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GREAT !
WOW !! THIS IS REALLYY GOOODD !!,
Do you think you could look
at my poems and give me some tips?
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