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Within Myself.

I'm a gentle breeze

sometimes trapped

within a turbulent storm.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    I can see that happening actually ~ it's playing out in my mind ((Ooo strong imagery, yay!))

    I like the description it gives a great insight into you and you've written it very well.

    Thank you for taking the time for entering and I wish you the best of luck.

    Claire xx


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    June 10, 2008

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    I liked this alot a pleasant and honest description, great work and good luck