She's smiling,
But underneath
lies her broken heart
and spirit...
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A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten words (again) by Noir mariposa...x.
1100 points, ended June 11, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think of the poem? Be honest, but not too harsh :)
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describe this poem in one word..
excellent
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This sounds like me at the moment. I think I wrote a poem along the same lines as this the other day (shows you how good I am, can't even remember what I've written!!)
Very nicely written. I hope you feel better soon.
Thank you for entering,
I wish you luck.
Claire xx
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im sure so many people will relate to this,
your not completely broken you just need to clip your angel wings back on my dear,
i love this so much, love you!!
all my love,
kitty xx -
your not broken auntie
you still bretahe and your still beautiful
i love you -
i thought it was very nice
i liked it
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