single sparks shutter
within the mind's eyelids, as
they attempt to focus
on that fleeting light's sequence,
which bounces or reflects you.
Author notes
underwater lights and harps...
A contest entry
- - Feelings of Weightlessness - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Sink/Swim
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~
I am being shown a streetlight for some reason~ and word: Chicago-
also being directed to look at either a storm drain or sewage drain but it is on the side of the curb- Reference to a coffee shop and again being shown the streetlight
Something about this four way stop- whether metaphor or a symbolism-
Hearing word: caution~ Earlier I was reading a piece which was also showing me a truck coming forward and a nudge to watch the street- when crossing
I'm being shown again~ I'm seeing Starbucks- but emphasis on word: Star in
Starbucks Nudged to mention word: Careful
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...fleeting light's sequence
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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whew... I think thats the longest comment I've ever gotten! Thanks for reading and everything, appreciate it very much!
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