There's no greater tragedy
Than having to miss you
Because without you I can't see
Whatever happens to be true
There's no greater pain
Than not being at your side
Your love drives me insane
For it I'll cross the ocean wide
There is no greater harm
Than one moment on my own
One second without your charms
Is like an eternity all alone
There are so many ways to prove the love I feel is true
But nothing can explain just how much I miss you
Author notes
this poem was written for the girl of my dreams, unfortunately we broke up recently... i felt like sharing my pain with the world... because the world to me is Terri-lynn
A contest entry
- [Flash] .Give me love. [Flash] by PrettyxoxPoison.
1200 points, ended June 15, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Difference Between 'I Need You' and 'I Love You' by SoulfulBubbles.
400 points, ended October 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Heart Felt
Free verse form, young and impressionable - please keep writing.
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Oh
I'm so sorry about Terri-lynn =[
I hope it all works out
If it helps
This poem is very good!
Favorite part:
There is no greater harm
Than one moment on my own
One second without your charms
Is like an eternity all alone
It's fantastic =)
If you ever need to talk
I'm here =D
Thanks for sharing this in my contest
Great job and good luck!
♥[Katee]♥
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