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On the shore

The waves move together as one
Until crashing into unidentifiable pieces
Story of her life

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  • jogn
    June 15, 2008
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    short and sweet

    Life is a wave tossing and churning not sure whether to make a break or just gently move the sand.


  • Lavender Butterfly
    June 10, 2008
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    deeply compelling... x