Embracing
essence
revolving
in foams
and fluffed clouds,
trying to find
my shade
of grey.
A contest entry
- another picture prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended June 10, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
I love the shade of grey it gives so much
often use it myself
best wishes and well done on your well deserved Bronze
Julie
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yup..there is so much in grey to discover!
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I like your treatment of the tresses - fluffed and trying to find the grey. Foams, as well, I think.
Congrats on your bronze trophy.
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Thanks a lot Judith for your kind words..
Have a nice day!
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beautifully drawn... x
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Thank you
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I think we all need to embrace who we are and find that shade of grey that suits us!
Brill write hun
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Thanks again dear...and you are very right in your comment!may we all swell in our grey!
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Wow this was so deeply beautiful and touching. Gorgeous imagery portrayed and true emotions unfolding from within. Loved the final thought, trying to find her shade of grey-- I can relate to that line, as its so hard to find ourselves when we go through periods of loss and confusion- grey seems to be the only colour we cannot find, as our minds are shaded.
Brilliant write! & best of luck
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Thank you for such a lovely comment...grey is what the world seems to be coloured in !
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