A broken bird
caged by life
and put on display
Author notes
Yea, life is a bit of a cage for me. People see me struggling but never help. But I'm not a pretty bird. I'm a crow. So that explains the background, um I did purple text cause thats my favorite colour.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten words (again) by Noir mariposa...x.
1100 points, ended June 11, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful imagery. Hope you can grow your wings and fly. You certainly have talent when it comes to writing!!
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There's beautiful imagery in this... in a way. I know you how you feel with this, I feel like this sometimes. I like the logic with the text and background colours too ~ they do indeed suit the poem.
Thank you for entering, and i wish you the best of luck
Claire xx -
So I'm not the only one....Trapped as a bird...good poem
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hey this is cool as. great way to see yourself too, well not great way to look at urself but you know what I mean..!
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