I dreamt yesterday
And living for tomorrow
Where is today
A contest entry
- Describe yourself in ten words (again) by Noir mariposa...x.
1100 points, ended June 11, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please help me to turn to be a better writer
Comments
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good write. even though its short. hope to see more.
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this is a small but very strong meaningful poem
i like the meaning of the poem
though i am not sure whether i caught your meaning or got my own meaning
anyway you have done a great job
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a very simple poem it is
nothing special for me
but the way you have written it is not simple
its great
it will remind us that we have to work hard today to have a better future tomorrow
i really love this poem
I dreamt yesterday
And living for tomorrow
Where is today
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This reminds me of that saying; "today is the tommorrow we worried about yesterday"
Always liked that quote, it was always intriguing to me. Your line has done the same. It's very thought probing like Lowercase said.
Thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck,
Claire xx -
hmm...interesting. it gets your thoughts stirring. very well penned. it's intriguing.
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