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Torment

WHAT CAN YOU DO WHEN ONES MIND IS TAINTED
SO FULL OF SELFISHNESS AND HATRED

BEING BRAIN WASHED AND CONTROLLED
THAT IS SOME ONE WITH A LOST SOUL

LIKE A WASTE OF TIME SPENT
GOING THROUGH THE TORMENT

EVERY ONE IS LOOKING FOR SOMETHING
BUT WE MUST REMEMBER ONE THING

WHEN EVERY THING SEEMS TO BE FADING
OUR LIVES ARE IN THE MAKING

healing in process

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  • raggyann
    June 11, 2008
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    this is awsome
    i realy liked this one


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    This is brilliant and conveys such a great message, I loved how you ended this. "Our lives are in the making", this is such a thought provoking statement. Well done.