The feeling is overwhelming
It gives me a lot of pleasure
How can i stop myself from continueing on?
The pain
The blood
It flows out of me
But i somehow dont feel it
Help me
Stop my insanity of confusing pain with pleasure
Before I lose myself to Jashin
The one source that devours my pain
Bringing me pleasure
ooh please
Stop me before its too late
A contest entry
- NOT ALONE[invites only] by Prettyfacesliewell.
550 points, ended July 1, 5 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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well done doll,
i would have to say the spaceing was not needed but then on the other hand i do that as well lol great work thanks much for entering!
endless
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well its not good but its not blindingly bad. the double space adds nothing to the poem becuse it really has no flow to aid. Also im not want to speak on content to often but why is everyone in this anm contest so fucking sad. I am clinicly not all there myself but i still find a way to have a cheery dispostion. Keep writing and good luck.
Bryant J Frye
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