Hatched, just a chick
haven't got a clue
pecking your way
into a big wide world
where everybody else
is holding honey mustard sauce
and ready to devour you
Author notes
Love you Tory
A contest entry
- graduation by Dienush.
1550 points, ended June 15, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this poem is very unique. it realy made me think about the fufure since, well, i will be graduating next year from high school. and im sure so many feel just like the baby chick you wrote about in here. lovely write
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The poem seems to have a satirical touch. Whatever has been said may be right. But everyone, ncluding a graduate has to accept the real challenges of life. Life is not easy for anyone. Everyone has to pass through a laybrinth and has to carve his own way.
If the poem aims at the defective methods of higher education, you have got a point there. The education must be on the lines that prepare a graduate for the practical life. A university has to equip him with the skills to lead his life and career successfully.
The theme is unique and admirable.
Rahi
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Very nice metaphor and I also like your use of word economy. Thanks for your entry
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Well, that's sending them out in a really positive way. 
Good luck in the contest, my friend. 
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Lol, the sense of humor in this one is great. A chick peeking its way out of an egg...only ready to be devoured by what lies ahead! ~Sie
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