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Funny how that happens

New information, the day turns sour
funny how that happens sometimes

On top of the world
all the Demons have been fought
one by one they surrender
beaten by patience, time

Life is looking good, bills paid
concentration shifts to the next step

Then wham!! Over the edge, falling, weightless
funny how that happens sometimes

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  • Desire gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Funny how that happens
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~
    I kept seeing wild as it seems a bucking bronco...but noooooooo rider...I'm seeing the bronco kicking and kicking~ Now hearing number 21 whether 2/1 but getting symbolism- also that phrase:
    tired of being tired- being shown a sofa-couch-loveseat (all those words) but reference to unable to be comfortable~ like reference to sitting on pins and needles
    Hearing word: Sister~ whether Yours or someone elses- Hearing word: Attraction
    and also~ may sound strange but phrase: Slow down Sailor- but like metaphor and hearing phrase: got a lot of open water to go through
    Nudged to mention phrase: Don't count Your chickens before they hatch~
    and being shown an egg- but brownish black slime oozing out as if from what I am
    seeing- another flip side: wanting to scramble eggs- but cracked open it is not what it appears~ a baby chick
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    concentration shifts to the next step
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~



  • nilav
    June 10, 2008
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    anything can happen in love....and this weightlessness too...nice poem


  • In Too Deep1
    June 9, 2008

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    Beautifully penned. I agree. It is funny how life plays out with a little patience and determination. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp