levitated by my inner zen
Shedding all troubles
that have worried me
With a clear mind
and a free-spirit
I let my body become
light as a feather
and my feet leaves
the ground, weightless
I may never return...
Author notes
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Artist Unknown...Sorry
In a list
A contest entry
- - Feelings of Weightlessness - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Freedom Of The Trivial
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~
I kept seeing wild as it seems~ a woman on a cross...as if she was being crucified
and reference to Witch Burning~ Nowwwwwwwwww-
for some reason I am hearing the phrase: I feel sorry for You...Now I am not saying this pertains to You but while I was reading~ I kept hearing that phrase permeate in my Mind- the word: abuse keeps rapping and again not saying it pertains to You and also
abuse can come in all forms beyond the physical, emotional, spiritual, mental also the abuser can be society etc
I'm getting phrase: infringe on human rights- and then reference to Catch 22
Also being shown a white flag waving~ but being shown Dr. Martin Luther King Jr
and phrase~ Free At Last howeverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr getting: don't let them take Your Dignity
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
levitated by my inner zen
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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