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Not Alone

In a world so cold as ice where a soul cant be find

I fear im trapped in a nightmare

Someone please help me get out of this nightmare

I fear this animal inside of me will be released

Making everything more dark

And only the tiniest of light

Will be shone by a Crismon Moon upon black roses and tombstones

A mist is flowing by now

And i fear the spirits of this world will come back to haunt me

Unloved

With no hope left to be find

Only the moans of the dead can be heard in this unforgiven world

But i do have faith but will God put it out for the souls lost in the darkness?

Its not to late to look for it or is it?

I dont know anymore

My mind is clouded up by these images of my harsh past

Bringing me pain

I wish not to feel pain or i'll regret it and if i do that

I'll die and be lost like the souls here in this world

I am going to start running now

Run away from everything

For its all i can do for now

I wish the LIGHT will come back and put life on this earth

But i guess its not goin to happen

But i know im not alone

Not alone with this feeling

Wanting hope and peace

Be ridden of pain and regret

I hope it comes soon before DEATH finds me

Yet again

IM NOT ALONE

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  • hilly
    June 18, 2008
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    I can't even read this. Please fix the grammatical mistakes and typos. For example, the first line should be

    In a world as cold as ice, where a soul can't be found

    instead of

    In a world so cold as ice where a soul cant be find

    I have to remove this simply because it's a complete mess. Thanks for entering anyway though.


  • rockinruler
    June 10, 2008

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    Emm

    Really sorry i didnt like it
    It seems to be more of an essay with like just lines flowing and describing your thoughts