Like volcano, faith erupted
The beginning of hate,
The world got corrupted
By 'lucifer' the great disrupter of faith
Before time, the Great War happened
In heaven, He fell fast
From heaven, his vengeance on humanity,
He did it on September eleven
That day, I remember it well
On earth it was hell.
Millions tears fell,
"The Weeping woman” in pain
she cried again
Eyes were sharpened
The impossible happened
believers formed rebelion
Atheist saw a chance to defeat religion
Words turned to flames
and burn. Some one is to be blame
Evil seeds,a chance to be fame
in this clash of faith.
desert stormed at the killing field
Innocents suffered from 'fire at will'
Do you knows who is right?
i only saw who was left
Author notes
without religion, do you think their would be less trouble like today? i am confused, i hate to see people dying from gunshot, innocents suffering.
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Comments
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I would fix the grammar in this poem; it makes it hard to read. Some parts of it seem disconnected with other parts, and they don't seem to fit together. The overall idea of the poem is a creative one. Thanks for entering.
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i like how u related the initial battle in heaven to Sept. 11th. this poem is deep and thought provokindg. good job and good luck!
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