The pain is overwhelming
I don't know what to do now
As the poison continues it way through my veins
I scream out your name
But you don't come running
Running
To my side
Just stand there
Watching me as I slowly die
The poison has reached its point
Now my heart goes
Thud thum
Thud thum
I take one last look in your eyes
Now I am stricken with fear
I yell in agonizing pain
I scream out your name
But you dont come running to my side
You just stand there
Watching me die
With my last ounce of strength
I whispered out your name
With fear in my eyes
'Cause I now know who you are
You were the one who put the venom in my veins
You were the one who killed my friend
You are the one who holds those emerald
Snake eyes
A contest entry
- A Fistful of Prompts by x--nocturnia--x.
750 points, ended July 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Still magnificent


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very nice... very clever take on the prompt... thankyou and best of luck!!

