Restless resonance grasps my attention
repeatedly echoing inside my head
warning me of obvious mistakes
and beseeching me
to not waste
his time
~♥~
Author notes
Tried my best!
XXVampireeyesXX
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A contest entry
- Quickie..... Because I can! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended June 9, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your GREEN trophy into GOLD by Sweet Sorrow.
400 points, ended June 21, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gimme your greenies by crazymomma.
300 points, ended August 11, 2008, 58 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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I absolutely love this piece... No other way to say it, it is amazing. And so often true.
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I really liked the alliteration in the first line and the format you used in this. This is such a unique take on the prompt of time. I really liked the story too. Thanks for entering and good luck
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Excellent format and presentation. Such interesting piece. Thank you for sharing
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wow babe... you did awesome and congrats on the Honorable mention but it should have been more then that in my eyes.... thanks for sharing this hun...
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Nice One
Not that bad of a poem here. you really did quite well with thr structure flow and your choic eof wording really made this an attractive. any ways congratulations on the Honorable Mention Trophy and keep up the good work. your fav Tiger =)
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Lovely format, well writ!
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A thoughtful and provoking take on the image. Nicely done! Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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