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The Oppressor

We tremble in shadows
with random bits of carcass
to remind us
that we are never safe.

Do we dare to breath
only to retch, to retch only
to perish in
bloody massacres to fulfill the incomprehensible
dream
of peace or “something like it”

Pressing hands to lips
we stifle cries

of heart broke anger,

to know our hope was never lost,
it was stolen.



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Prompted by a picture titled "Queen" by Apius at Diviantart.com

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http://aspius.deviantart.com/art/QUEEN-25225860

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  • "We tremble in shadows
    with random bits of carcass
    to remind us
    that we are never safe."

    I love that first stanza, it's awesome!
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    my piece is up

    I looked at the picture and this is what I saw, hope it works.