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Dawning

Windy twilight glances
Like the crash of a thousand lances
and darkly whispers in places I have lain
Though I go and you remain
look not for me in darkness grave
with rosy spears tall and brave
but in the light on the horizon
when the work of darkness done
I will come, bright banner unfurled
and shed my light upon your world

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  • Kleroo
    June 20, 2008

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    I really like this especially when you say "look not for me in darkness... but in the light on the horizon" great wording From one of your Favorites Kleroo

  • evelynxxoo
    June 20, 2008
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    loved the last two lines over all liked the whole affect of this poem