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Friday 27th October

Falling tears
Paranoid fears
Dashed hope
Can't cope

Long weeks
Soiled cheeks
Fake smile
Lost awhile

Open scars
Seeing stars
Ignorant bliss
Death's kiss

Remembered pact
Fragile tact
Hard to find
Loosing time

Hating love
Ignoring above
Black turmoil
Blood's boil

Forsaken heart
Falling Apart
False Face
Death's embrace

Loosing blood
Drowning flood
Closed eyes
Self demise.

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  • eclairluv
    June 10, 2008

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    I really liked, "Long Weeks Soiled Cheeks Fake Smile Lost Awhile," and "Falling Apart False Face." This was a particularly heavy read. A lot of depth and darkness, which I like!!