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The Right Moment

There's something I need to say
It sits on my mind all day
All I need is the right moment.
Im worried about what you will say
I've thought about it for days.
Yeah, it been awhile
but the words wont come and when they do
They only stay for a little while
im waiting for the right moment
a moment where your heart is open
and you are not weighed down
with thoughts deep in your mind.
I pictured so many reactions in my head
Im not sure which one you'll use
But I hope that its the later of them
Im ready to tell you, that's true
I've fallen in love with you

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  • Narufoxchan
    November 11, 2008

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    i really enjoyed this one, H! the reactions... so many possibilities and you're able to wonder and put in words precisely what you feel