To that direction
where the road is blooming -
lush-ed with love
and journeyed by you.
A contest entry
- ~North~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow..that was an amazing piece..
loved d lines "where the road is blooming -
lush-ed with love "..
beautiful use of metaphor and wonderful imagery..
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holla... lovely chorus ...lol
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Beautifully written
So to the point; yet so deep and touching the soul.
You are definately gifted.
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brillant metaphor.
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Simply divine.
Much-deserving of the gold trophy.
Well done on a such a brilliant write
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Thank you! I never thought that this tiny little write would have such impact. Who knew? Smile.
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This poem really Kisses the emotions as you have Kept
It
Short and
Sweet.
wonderful write. Great imagery and beautifully picturesque. Keep penning such wonders dear.
I would appreciate your visit to my page to stamp your impressions there.
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What a beautifully written poem.
I'm in point the direction
Exellent in it's splendid brevity.
Congradulation's on the Gold.
Tony
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Muchas gracias por tu commentario. Ha! another language to thank you in. :-)
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Gorgeous! I just wrote of this very same metaphor.
I admire two such different imageries joining to
complete a full meaning. Blue
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Gorgeous. Such heart wrenching emotion in such short, beautiful words. You are so talented it makes me green with envy
Ink XOXOXOXO
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So much said in so few words, it left me breathless.
Beautifully written.
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thank you so much.
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There is indeed power in brevity. This is lavish and pregnant with sensuality. Superior writing. lines 1-4 are exceptional!
Geo
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thank you so much.
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This is such an amazing piece!!! So full of emotion, ye so brief!!!
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Honestly I'm surprised that these few lines impacted so many. Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
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This is really good. Congratulations on your gold trophy! In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Thank you so much.
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WOW...
My words humble by comparison... And that poem, "By the Fire", is simply emaculate!!
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Muchas Gracias! (thank you in spanish)
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My idea of Perfection. It is a crime against humanity if this isn't published somewhere.
A well deserved gold. I bookmarked this last night.
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Thank you, so much.
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This is certainly deserving of gold
congrats
moon2u
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Thank you so much.
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beautiful. so much in so few words. i like this
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Thank you.
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The title itself... tells it all.
A journey to LOVE.
Though late...my congrats to your GOLD!
Summer51
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this is a beautiful piece, congrats on the gold.
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Congrates on the Gold!
Wonderfully worded, thanks for sharing you!
Peace, Timothy
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Awesome and stunning
Creative and cool
whatever i say
that wont be enough
to praise this poem
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Very creative, Excellent Poem!
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Thank you so much.
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Well deserved gold. So few words, so much meaning. I wish I could do that! I enjoy watching as your talent and skill evolve.
Garrison
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a good short poem that smiles delight and love
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lovely ending. thats a nice hopeful thought, for me reading that....to find someone who's road to themself was actually travelled by them. enjoyed the read. congrats on the win!
blu
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Just so good, congrats on the gold.
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thank you Celadia, thank you.
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quintessential are roads traveled
where blossoms sway
and the honey-lips spill
hearts rise…comes to my mind…congratulations on golden
mal
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eloquent
eloquent so few word that speak so many volumes
warm light and love
Robert
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This is beautiful and very well written. I always love where you go with a common prompt. You are so creative. Congratulations
Much Love
Carrie
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just beautiful... x
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Lavender Butterfly...thank you so much!
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wow!
That sounds like a good direction! l.o.l. j.k. this is very good, even though it's short it says alot.
good luck in the contest!
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aww wow, this is sooo sweet and tender.
great write and good luck
take care
stephanie
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