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The Road To You

To that direction
where the road is blooming -
lush-ed with love
and journeyed by you.

A contest entry

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  • tombruize
    September 5
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    WOW...

    My words humble by comparison... And that poem, "By the Fire", is simply emaculate!!

  • The Slug
    September 3
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    My idea of Perfection. It is a crime against humanity if this isn't published somewhere.
    A well deserved gold. I bookmarked this last night.


  • moon2u silver member
    September 1
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    This is certainly deserving of gold
    congrats
    moon2u


  • A63-Angel
    August 25
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    beautiful. so much in so few words. i like this


  • summer51
    August 24

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    The title itself... tells it all.
    A journey to LOVE.

    Though late...my congrats to your GOLD!


    Summer51

  • celadia
    August 2
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    this is a beautiful piece, congrats on the gold.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 10
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    Congrates on the Gold!

    Wonderfully worded, thanks for sharing you!

    Peace, Timothy


  • sOuL gold member
    July 3

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    Awesome and stunning
    Creative and cool
    whatever i say
    that wont be enough
    to praise this poem
    take care

  • Zork
    June 25
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    Very creative, Excellent Poem!


  • CaliOkie silver member
    June 24

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    Well deserved gold. So few words, so much meaning. I wish I could do that! I enjoy watching as your talent and skill evolve.

    Garrison

  • a good short poem that smiles delight and love


  • April Renee
    June 17

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    lovely ending. thats a nice hopeful thought, for me reading that....to find someone who's road to themself was actually travelled by them. enjoyed the read. congrats on the win!

    blu

  • celadia
    June 10
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    Just so good, congrats on the gold.

  • Malabu
    June 10

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    quintessential are roads traveled
    where blossoms sway
    and the honey-lips spill
    hearts rise…comes to my mind…congratulations on golden
    mal


  • rc3 gold member
    June 9
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    eloquent

    eloquent so few word that speak so many volumes
    warm light and love
    Robert

  • This is beautiful and very well written. I always love where you go with a common prompt. You are so creative. Congratulations

    Much Love
    Carrie

  • just beautiful... x

  • Swangrnv
    June 9

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    wow!

    That sounds like a good direction! l.o.l. j.k. this is very good, even though it's short it says alot.
    good luck in the contest!

  • aww wow, this is sooo sweet and tender.
    great write and good luck
    take care
    stephanie

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