with flattering tongue,
to your impetuous
flow~
we travel the stars,
with our eyes
closed
Author notes
prompt; my thoughts to, North
A contest entry
- ~North~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ohhh beautifully passionate in so few words and in wonderful imagery!
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wow ...man ur good at these short pieces, congratulations on the silver, well worth it...
Linda
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lots of images conjured with this one. A charming and delightful read as always. Best of luck, Keep smiling and keep penning.
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excellent wording.
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Beautiful....so beautiful. Congrats on your prize. Smile.
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sincerely beautiful... x
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oh! what great thoughts you have! well done. Juls
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nice twist at the end
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omg, this is amazing, i love this
geat write and good luck (like you need it)
take care
stephanie
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