Shattered brilliance
on the floor
A piece of masterpiece
Impaled me
Crimson escapes, heading north
on the floor
A piece of masterpiece
Impaled me
Crimson escapes, heading north
A contest entry
- ~North~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The mark of a true poet is being able to say more in 5 lines than he can in 500 lines. And you achieved this hon. WONDERFUL work. "a piece of materpiece imapaled me" wonderful work.
Warmest,
Mylee -
Wow. Intense and so creative. Best of luck.
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immensely creative.... x
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aww wow, i really like this one alot.
great write and good luck. its so deep
take care
stephanie
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hmmmmmmmmmm interestingly wonderful lol.... thanks for sharing this with us and gooood luck in the contesst...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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