Over used directions
ran turmoil
on highways;
Pointing to the sky
for answers
in destiny.
Author notes
prompt: north
15words
pic credit:star by ~Crusher2006
A contest entry
- ~North~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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sincerely creative... x
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Loved this picture, loved your words. This was brilliant! took me forever to come up with something half decent for this prompt which you penned in minutes and is marvelous! well done!
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Wow! I really enjoyed this little piece. Best wishes in the contest.
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profoundly this touches upon uncertainty...and expound upon the answers of higher being..I like where you took me...
Mal
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I like this.
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Oh Steph, great words you have penned here, love the picture you chose to go with them. Love Juls
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thanks alot
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wow great take on the prompt...
you did a wonderful job here.... thanks for sharin this with us and goooood luck in contst..!
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