Sin slides easy off
enlightened hills
following night,
as confessions melt
in a penitent breeze
Author notes
15 words on north
A contest entry
- ~North~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Loving it!! You know I adore writes about sin and penance... Gold in my books!
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truly a creative take... x
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good luck
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