Her soul
Resigns
From her body
But
Does not head
To the heavens
This time
Author notes
15 words
prompt: north
In a list
A contest entry
- ~North~ by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 9, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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i really love your take on the prompt, i somehow missed that contest too, its a great way to describe north, congratulations on the bronza, and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Wow...I know how this feels. Congrats on your prize.
LL
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What a wonderful take on the prompt my friend, congrats on the Bronze!!
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This is certainly compelling and right outside the box ~ loved it!.. x
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Awww, this is sad but I do like where you took the prompt. Well done. Juls
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aww wow, this is very deep for the prompt
take care and good luck
stephanie
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Very nice. Very short. Very despairing. Great job.
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Wow my twin...this is deep....wonderfully emotional.
I wish you luck.
~kystal angel
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cool poem =]
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