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all in all is all we are

Coming of age.

Coming into life.

Relation ships broken,
So many words left unspoken.

All bridges left to burn.

I can not return…

And all that I have gained,
is the knowledge of wrong.
and I am wondering if I am that strong,
strong enough to make it in life.

When

The tears I have shed
My wounds that have bleed,
the things I have done
and victories won
all mean nothing in the standing of time
so why do I try
and why do I whine,
when all in all is nothing
at all and all in all is all we are,

yes i know its a quote but its my take on it.

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  • SandCat
    July 10, 2008

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    Nice

    Crazy rhythm. Kinda full of anxiety, like made me feel it huge. The progression, in the length of thoughts, is awesome.

  • xXDarkChildXx
    June 9, 2008

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    that was really nice... I liked it. P.s thanks for the comment on one of my poems... I hope to read more from you...