Months of freedom under the glowing sun
Days of enjoyment with lasting fun
Escape from reality, living without fear
Finally they say, “Summer time is here”
But to me these days will remain dark
As in my pain, with weakness I lark
Bound to the faces of whom tie me down
In summer days, each day I drown
A contest entry
- * SUMMERTIME* by wingsofgold25.
500 points, ended June 15, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any lines your hated.. maybe liked??
Comments
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The two stanzas are very well written.The Rhyme is good not forced.
But I felt like there was something missing between the two. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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