like the morning sun illuminates the sky
so your glow brings forth a brilliance to my eye
like the midnight moon bright and full from the start
you sew a spell on my heart
like the power of thunder bolts shaking the ground
to my knees in the beauty in you that ive found
like the crashing of waves on a crystaline shore
you are my soul and much more
like the first flower of spring leading way for the rest
marked beginning of time from the now for the best
till the end of all time shall it always be true
that my love belongs to you
Author notes
My BF Jake is my inspiration ^.^
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A contest entry
- Love poems, Letters, etc. by SaviDropKick.Oi..
375 points, ended July 14, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ode to Love. Picture Inspired. by Jade.Butterfly.
300 points, ended August 17, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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Awe....
young love at its best!
Lovely content, timing & rhyming. What a tender write to Jake. 
I sure hope you gave this to him...or would he think this is to mushy for a guy? 
I for one can grok! 
Trust all's well. 
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I think i'm at a loss for words here.
Incredible piece you have.
blew me away.
-Mandi
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i really like this
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