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Was it the rose or the wine?

Candlelight flickers
    shattering the shadows.
Masculine meets feminine
    developing one another.

Lips to lips.

Butterflies flutter
    flying on out the door.
Lust slow dances with love
    enveloping each other.

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  • river-meadows
    August 23
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    I love the sweet romantic simplicity, and how you also describe passion overtaking slight unsurity. =


  • When Darkness Falls
    July 5, 2008
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    good job
    very romantic!
    it was small but very well written


  • moonbumps silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Bless you for joining in my first contest such a lovely sweet write too!
    Good luck!
    xxx Hilly