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Twinkling Rapture!

Under infinite sparkling stars
we embrace passsion tenderly.

Our lips touch in ecstasy,
as twirling tongues fondue
in succulent rapture.

The night is brilliant
for love and we are
fascinated.

Captured in adoring surrender
by the moonlight of two hearts
wedded in devotion.



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  • wohadreambig
    July 7, 2008

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    AWWWW this is beautifully written and has such nice imagry. Keep up the good writing and good luck in the contest


  • m...c
    June 10, 2008
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    "All Bow to the Great Darell!!!"


  • LadyLuff
    June 10, 2008
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    great poem!


  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    June 9, 2008
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    aww i like this!
    thnx for entering!