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Will you

Will you
Look deep perceive
Softly cry my name
Teach me your love
Request my soul
Touch my heart
Whisper sweetly

Kiss my lips with gentleness

Would you
Hold me awhile
Love slowly
Yearn for me
Be there in the dawn
Feel deep my love
Walk with me

Gaze into my eyes to discern

Can you
Learn my love my ways
Hold me when I am sad
Be there for me often
Love till I learn your ways
Laugh with me cry with me
Hold me close in your heart

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    Lovely...all the tender and precious questions one should be willing to say yes to...in order to enjoy a deep and fullfilling love with another. Best of luck in the contest.

    Blessed Be~
    Az


    • Moonlightdragon gold member
      June 10, 2008
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      Wa-Le-Lu

      Then i have won a priceless gift to bring a small bit of joy to your ear

      warm light and love
      Robert

    • Moonlightdragon gold member
      June 10, 2008
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      Azlyn

      Yes these are the words of my heart and my quest
      warm light and love
      Robert


  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    June 9, 2008
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    i liked it a lot!