You are my everything. Never have I known love like ours.
You wipe away my tears; erase away my fears. No one could compare. I know it is cliche, to love you this way, but my heart is in control now; for it belongs to you. Every day I smile as I awake by your side knowing you were there to protect me through the night. Mi papasito, mi amo, My one true love. I know God must have sent you from above. I never believed in soulmates, 'til you came into my life. Now I'm filled with love. You took away the strife. Forever I'll be thankful to have you as my mate. I knew you were the one from our very first date. I love you baby, more than you will ever know. I promise baby, every day to let it show.
You are my love, my life, my everything!
Author notes
just for the contest I decided to share this
A contest entry
- Love poems, Letters, etc. by SaviDropKick.Oi..
375 points, ended July 14, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Love, ain't it grand? This is such a touching piece.
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Lovely!
A poem worthy to frame for your Luis!
I hope you win the gold.
Regards,
Jennifer
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awww u gotta rose on there now!! pretty!
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My Verdict
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Awww Momma that is soo sweet!
You should win, this is sweet and true and expresses so much love that you have for Luis. He seems like a great man Momma and someday if you decide to marry him, I hope you have the best marrige and that your love for eachother will never end. I wish the best for you in life. Your one of the sweetest person I have ever met in my short 13 years of life. You have made me smile countless times, and I rarely ever smiled before I met you. You write from the heart and that is what I love most about you. And when you write it is one of the greatest things that I could read. And you write "clean", and not "dirty." One thing I really love about your writing. "I promise baby, every day to let it show." I love that line so much because it makes me feel happy because you are happy and you love him. And I love how you say when you awake in the morning you love him and think about him and how he makes you smile. I hope more than anything and the world you have a great marrige if you do marry him. I know you have had some complications in your past marriges, and you are affraid to remarry. And you have had alot of abuse and hardships in your life. But I guess you have been dating only 7 months, but your love seems like you have loved him forever. Don't let those people who tell you you shouldn't marry him becuase he's hispanic ruin your life. Race shouldn't matter in love. Its not the outside, its the inside. Great write and I know for a fact this was from the heart.
With Love,
your Allpoetry Daughter
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Wonderful
A very touching and powerful write. So perfect for the theme. Best of luck in the contest.
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such beautiful expression of a
tender love that should never be
taken granted. love is teh sweetest thing
spoken and hate is right next to
it, sometimes sipped as delicately.
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That's Darling!
It the expression of the heart, simpler said, that catches the moment, the love best. Wonderful write! Thank you for sharing!
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awwww!!!
very cute i love this!
thnx for entering
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