You came to me in the heat of the night
A Goddess wearing a shear white gown
Fine Gossamer gauze clinging to ever curve
With moonlight surrounding feminine splendor
Seeing this heavenly sight my breath catching
Heart pounding as if the earth was shaking
Crossing the room you seemed to drift
Or perhaps it was my head spinning
As you wrapped your arms around me
Gently pulling my torso to meet yours
Feeling warm breathe on tingling skin
This was no dream or ghostly visit
As I kiss your breasts my hand
grows persistent, making you cry out
I kissed your neck, your nipples,
Stomach, your thighs, wanting,
Needing your skin touching mine
Knowing the secrets to your passion
Lips aroused to swelling nipples
Rolling each around like fine wine
Thirsting filling my mouth
Rasping voice urging me farther down
Gentle slender fingers stroking my neck
Guiding on to the valley of desire
Awakening desire with need for you
I kneel between your silky thighs
Eyes meet and desire knows desire
Your gentle touch reassures me
My tongue stirring the burning
Hotness of your opening flower
You arched up to meet my tongue
Firmly pulling my head to your need
Again that sweet sound yes darling
O yes yes yes deeper now dear
Sucking sweet musky wet bud
Moans of your rapture echoing in my heart
Pausing to clam my rasping breathe
Looking up in half closed eyes
Taking in lips curved with a smile
Your pleasure in the moment
My greatest joy to satisfy
Tasting the sweetness of you,
Enflaming my senses, making you cry out
Fingers stroke me, tease me
Sensations that only a woman can give
Heightening my growing arousal
Guiding me into moist wetness
Vigorous strokes against the delicate pink folds of flesh
As flesh on flesh celebrate and free all desires
Our lustful hearts fires burning brightly
Craving aching to be taken
into depths of thirst quenching love
But for this moment I feel so alive
With greedy need I enter your womb
Your pleasure is now my pleasure
Passionate Hips thrusting in tempo
Firm thighs strain for completion
Lost upon wonder of celebrating our sex
Reaching the apex of heaven on earth
Time slows to stop then rushes on
Urging each other on to finish as one
Orgasm rushing over me, roaring
Hot fluid release vibrates through each
Woven together as one crying out joy
Whisper of sweet words of endearment
Lingering on sensual tingling emotions
Breathless whispered sighs on feathery kisses
Savoring the glowing peaceful bliss
Absorbing the spiciness of passions aroma
We hold each until I am quiet again
Until the desire comes again
A contest entry
- Sooooo Sensual.... by SummerlandRayne.
450 points, ended June 16, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I remember this as if it were yesterday...no one writes of love and desire as you do Sweetheart. You are a wonderful man.
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Oh My, Oh My !!! This was soooooo damn good.
I am so glad I don't have to sleep alone tonight. LoL
This is one hot and passionate piece of pure beauty, poetry at it finest. WoW I really love this, you are really good. You should give some love making lessons LMBO... All joking aside I really enjoyed this piece so much, think I might have my love read this poem, see if he enjoyed it as much as I do.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Loveandblessings2u
My humble thanks for your comments.
Blessings for you
light and love
Robert
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damn!
favorite line: "Moans of your rapture echoing in my heart" That is so sweet. This poem makes me ecstatic!
You're a great writer! I am so impressed with you! Keep it up and always know that you rock!
The Famous Reese Bailey
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Excellent
Lingering on sensual tingling emotions
Breathless whispered sighs on feathery kisses
Savoring the glowing peaceful bliss
Absorbing the spiciness of passions aroma
We hold each until I am quiet again
Until the desire comes again
I think this will work for Sue
I know her writing well
Best to you in the contest
Rick
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Just reading once again...
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azlyn
i am gratefully that you would read it twice
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Third time might be the charm Love!!!
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Oh BABY!!! This is intense lovemaking. Sensual and lustful...yet tender and sweet. I really...REALLY enjoyed this. I am amazed at the quality writes in this contest...is it getting hot in here? Thank you so much!
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Az
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