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unrequited love

i tell you love
i'm tired of trying
i can't love any more
so i'll stop pretending

i can't take it again
don't look me in the eyes
you know you make me melt
and unravel my disguise

you win with a smile
get me begging for more
yet time after time
you shut on me the door

how foolish was i
to be taken advantage of?
i hear this is what they call
an unrequited love

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  • KayJay46 gold member
    June 9
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    Very nice summation of love with "no return to sender" Smooth and flows well though a few of the rhymes were a bit of a reach (LOL) but we've all been there. More importantly, you were honest... and that makes it a great poem. Well done and best of luck...
    Ken


  • Poetess12
    June 9

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    Your poem is good. The stanza that I like the most is,
    "I can't take it again
    don't look me in the eyes
    you know you make me melt
    and unravel my disguise."

    Thanks for entering my contest.