Will there be any tears for me, baby?
Will you miss me?
Do you care?
Dancing alone to the beat of music
I can still feel you next to me
The scent of your skin;
your hair.
I’m sorry I hurt you today.
I didn’t want it to end this way.
Why won’t you answer your phone?
Talk to me, baby.
Are you okay?
Walking alone to the beat of my heart.
I can still taste your lips
The sound of your voice;
your sway.
I’m sorry I hurt you today,.
I didn’t want it to end this way.
Will you still crave for me, baby?
Will you still want me?
Need me?
Crying alone to the beat of dove’s wings.
I can still hear your cries.
The pain in your eyes;
your pleas.
I’m sorry I hurt you today.
I didn’t want it to end this way.
Try to believe me, baby
I didn’t want it to end this way.
I’ll really do miss you.
I didn’t want it to end this way.
I’m sorry I hurt you today.
Author notes
I like the rhythm of this, another song perhaps.
Please tell me what you think
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Well written!!!! Makes me think of past regrets. Those things that seem like a good idea at the time, but, as soon as they're done you realize how mistaken you were!
~DAWN~
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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I don`t find a bleeding woman, the least bit poetic or anything to sing about. Perhaps without the bloody angel on the left, your grief would be more believable. -
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Okay Bob just for you, I'll change the background. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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This is a beautiful write, Charley. I'm thinking maybe a blues or jazz rhythm would go well with the piece. Lots of emotion expressed in this, as well. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
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Thanks Haley for reading and commenting.
lots of love,
Charley
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