you say you care
i doubt you really do
'im always here for you'
but you feel so far
i love you to death
but i am nothing
i dont matter to you
im just me
stuck with the feeling
of being alone
&&haunting me
everyday
i wish it would go away
but i know it wont
i promise my self
i wont let this happen agian
becaue this hurts
way to much
Author notes
sooo... i havent written a poem i so frickin longgg. sorry it sucks =/
any thoughts???
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its cute!
whos it about>??? -
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thankss ( :
&& i not tellinggg =X -
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haha i read it and thought erin wrote it.
wow. its really good.
ok bye now. -
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
dude hannah wrote it. -
oh... i like it.
but i dont have any suggestions.
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No I love it!!
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dude my relpys are all confusedd =/
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thanksss =]
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oh and its all because i read this poem before i went to sleep.
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dear hannah, i had the saddest dream about you explaining why you're so sad, for some reason in the dream you were insanely depressed and you told amanda and then i was there and you were explaining this long confusing story as to why you were so sad, and it was my fault that were so sad and you were explaining why you listened to sad music and how you had to wear a mask and i wish i remembered more of the dream but i only remember a few images. it made me sad to wake up.
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dude. why then?
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why what kali?
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why is she depresssed in your dream?
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because i read this poem before i went to bedd. and she IS ALWAYS SAD NOW. by the way.
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no i mean, you said she was explaining why she was sad. do you remember the reason?
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no i remember two images of her sitting there with her laptop and all the sad songs she listened to now, and then i remember how she was explaining that she was soooooo sad now and she had to wear a mask and for some reason she had a literal mask to show mee. but thats alll i remember.
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hmmm...interesting...
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hm. i can really guess who you're writing too. =P
anyways its really good, it doesn't sound like you
i hate the sadness in it i like to be happy
and you're all depressing
i'm glad you wrote a poem.
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its not really written 'to' somebody
&&its not about one specific person either..
thens for commentinggg everybody =DD -
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ahahahaha. but up there you said you aren't telling. its easy to guess still hannah.
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i didnt tell. i just elaborated more.
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haha. apparently you don't think it is but i've spent most of my life with you sitting around wondering things about you and i have other people to help i have a really good theory that i'm not telling you but yeah, based on the life story me and people have written for you its easy to guess =P
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lawl i remember this.
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