Two Heartbeats

Nestled between two giant heartbeats
beneath me mud soft and cool,
blissful repose we quietly doze
not to move is the first golden rule,
much better than going to school!

A contest entry

YOU THINK YOU ARE HIP TO LOVING LARGE? 30 words - #85- by Roaddog Wolf. 475 points, ended June 23, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Roaddog Wolf
June 23, 2008

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aye the we little one is playing hooky, think he'll be missed? good write

thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
Bob Fox
June 9, 2008

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Lol
Just the cutest take on a picture prompt that I have seen in sometime. This has to be a winner gal...Good luck
Sue Cardwell
June 9, 2008

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I saw this and thought of you...and you didn't disappoint.

A great little verse!

All the best in the contest...

Love you

Suz

xxx