I think that every one
Has their secret land
And maybe you would like to hear
About my beautiful land of Wizlando
It's a small country
With green grasses and bushes
Flowers and hedges
And animals
Without cages
Many wizards and witches
Work and live in my land
Making spells and potions
Because you see
Wizlando is meant to be
A place to make
Spells and Potions
The temperature is just right
And ingredients can be easily found
So the hard-working folks
Help the entire magical community
There're also brave soldiers
Who are partly wizards
They defend the land
Against trolls and giants
And those awful hags
Lucky I am
To have such a nice land
But the only way
You can reach it
Is by the expressway
Of imagination
Author notes
I love fairy tales,there extremely lovely.I think I could have written a better poem than this;I've been out of practise for some time.
A contest entry
- Fairytales by Samcat.
1000 points, ended July 20, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give me your honest opinion,I dont mind a hard comment
Comments
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its full of imagination.
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No, it's a great poem! You must have a vivid imagination! It's really good!
Good luck!
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Wow, this was very vivid. You really have an imaginative brain! I love the part when you said, "But the only way, You can reach it, Is by the expressway, Of imagination," it really said a lot about your creativity and imagination.
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