Tears of anger these are not,
far from a river of sadness,
distant is that lot.
Tears of hate these not be,
No pain here,
to feel, touch, hear, or see.
Tears of joy are now falling,
only of love are these tears,
of happiness and heaven calling.
Author notes
Da poem sux, but i just felt it needed to be written.
Written December 29th, 2003
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No this poem doesnt suck! its totally awesome, great job, very nice poem i love it, keep on writing
Love
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Very good write. Like this one a lot. Well, keep up the good work.
Ender -
awesome
I think this is great. I just read about triads and was thinking of writing one, but you have beaten me too it. But I still feel so proud that you finally have written something, and something this beautiful was worth waiting for.
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