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Relax ( Gold )

Midday siesta,

Within savanna's wallow,

Cooling showers mud's a bath,

Essential the oils,

Cleansing properties,

New to the skin peel,

Tranquil resting,

Escape from reality,

Health a farm,

They chill.

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YOU THINK YOU ARE HIP TO LOVING LARGE?
Picture inspired 30 words

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A contest entry

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  • perfectsunset
    September 16, 2008

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    Wow this was gorgeous sis.
    Brilliantly penned..
    so much emotion put into
    such brevity, lovely thoughts.

    Congrats on gold


  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 23, 2008

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    very nicely penned, good flow and covered allot in 30 words

    thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • Dark Otter
    June 12, 2008

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    Is there room in the bath for me, too?

    I would love one day just to get pampered like that. Next time you go, think of all your AP friends who will be envious. Thanks for the read.


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 12, 2008
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      I will be sure to invite you all into my Mud Bath
      and we can have a poetic ball
      xxx thanks hun xx


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    hehe.. what a great piece for that pic!! The pic is cute, you have penned succh a great write here for it hun!


  • Swtpoetryman
    June 9, 2008

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    LOL!!! THE CUTE ONE LOOKS LIKE ME! HE! HE! AND THE ONE WITH THE SEXY LEGS? WE ALL KNOW WHO THAT IS, BABY!

    A nice, long siesta in a pool of mud looks like a fine way to beat this HEAT WAVE that we are having in New England as I didn't sleep a wink, last night - and I need to get me beauty sleep - before I start looking like one of these slumbering Hippos at me 6 month check-up which I am NOT looking forward, too - at me doctors office tomorrow after work! If it wasn't for the nurses and medical assistants with there sexy uniforms and legs - I would call in sick! HE! HE!
    Sweet Dreams, Baby - and GOOD LUCK in this contest with this one!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    It just occurred to me - that this adorable picture would fit the saying LOVE IS BLIND to a T! HE! HE!

    OH, THERE IS NUTTIN I'D RATHER DO,
    THAN ROLL AROUND IN THE MUD WITH YOU!!

    ALL TOGETHER NOW! ONE MORE TIME!


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 9, 2008
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      My legs again.. you are naughty
      I hope you sleep well tonight and one way to chill is to listen to my My Space Music that will relax you..
      Hope all goes well with you tomorrow, and all those sexy nurses.. watch your BP ! !!!
      Night my friend and thanks for my poem love it xxx

  • Nighttime angel
    June 9, 2008

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    WOW.. Mum, I love this poem so much.. Mud bath huh? never had one of those before... excellent job.. Love your pic..

    good luck

    kat


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 9, 2008
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      Well I tell you what you visit the UK and I will treat us both to a day at a Health Farm
      Thanks Kat xxx


  • In Too Deep1
    June 9, 2008

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    Such a beautifully penned writ. The dirty thoughts really cleanse the pores and rejuvenate the skin. so few words penned in this piece has elasticity, stretching imagination and beauty. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp.


  • maralisa silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    Cooling showers mud's a bath,

    Essential the oils,

    Cleansing properties,

    New to the skin peel,

    Tranquil resting,

    Escape from reality,

    Health a farm,

    They chill.great poem hun good luck in the contestxx marina

  • imahealer
    June 9, 2008

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    Nuttin' better than a good old mud bath. Cleanses the skin, the mind and the soul! Away from then eyes of familial responsibilities, you close your eyes, let the mud dry, and loving yourself REALLY BIG! This is the most out-of-the box verse I have ever read.
    LOve your idea. Hippo. move over!
    LOve you!

    Linda


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 9, 2008
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      I am flattered sis yes it is very out of the box but felt it fitted at the same time.
      Beats the time I was an Lake Navasha, aged just 6.. when this huge mouth raised from the waters beneath!
      I ran a mile, my little legs never touched the ground.
      Thought I was going to be dinner!
      xxx


  • daviscth
    June 9, 2008

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    You did a great job with this sis. I love it. Good luck with the contest.

  • Bob Fox
    June 9, 2008

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    well dear

    First of all happy birthday and then again your pen strikes out softly and a summers breeze carries your words to the willow tree

    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 9, 2008
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      Thank you Bob I had a lovely birthday weekend
      and, for your lovely comment xxx

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