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~Picturesque~

Images of your subtle body,
etched into the retinas of my eyes,
opened or closed your silhouette entices inner desires,
taunting me.

Luminescent radiance of the sun,
a brilliant diamond once placed on your hand,
sealing our commitment for eternal completion.
Green flecks in your eyes,
an apple, ripe and ready for harvesting,
mouthwatering anticipation of a honeybees sweet nectar.
Aromatic lavender locks whisping in the wind,
beckoning to be touched.

Red embers fervent in sunset skies;
candles burning; lights dimmed low,
nuzzling your flawless nape,
breathing in your desires.

 

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Credit artist: Storm In Savannah by ~claybruster

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    Loved it. Absolutely loved it. This was exactly what I was looking for and hoping to get. You gave me sensual, passionate, mouth-watering, mind-swaddling, gorgeous imagery, depth & brilliance. Loved it from beginning to end. Amazing piece.

    Thanks so much for your entry & best of luck