Rainbow colors of fall leaves turning,
Soothing as the hearth fire burning,
lovely as the new snow, falling,
as the song of the warbler calling,
Like the feel so mesmerizing,
when you are first realizing,
you have fallen in love so deep,
life seems a dream escaped from sleep,
There is no way I could possibly,
describe this loveliness I see,
for she is all and more to me,
this is she,
this is she.
A contest entry
- Her beauty... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 23, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Magical words of describing her..I can see the truths in front of my eyes through the words of yours..well done.....
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you have captured the loveliness in a few choice words that sum up your love magically.
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Such a beautiful descriptive of your thoughts. The song like quality only makes it better. Imagery is excellent, rhyme is spot on, the whole poem- wonderful.
Good luck in the contest.
Storm
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What beauty you cast upon this screen.
absolutly lovely.
Good luck to you in the contest.
"life seems a dream escaped from sleep" ...what a sweet line.
Jamie
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